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Old 03-10-2008, 04:59 PM   #1
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jos1 vs arko

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Old 03-10-2008, 07:38 PM   #2
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Re: jos1 vs arko

you gone an pissed me off
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Old 03-10-2008, 08:38 PM   #3
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Re: jos1 vs arko

can't match me mentally dude, make sure you're credentials are scooped
after i beat you over and over like instrumentals on loop
guess you meant to be rude, so watch close as i roam the dark
the capture and burn this bitch, like Joan of arc
then stone ya heart, slash your back and shock your front
beer here for a year so i guess this loss starts your sophmore slump
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Old 03-10-2008, 08:42 PM   #4
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Re: jos1 vs arko

Hold it... you'll never link-bar's-like astronaurts finding-life-on MAR'S
Stop! ya-not-hittin like ya face on rw's ya just-not-FITTIN
Like ya-written's cause il shatter ya face-tastin pain~bitten
Stand up! cause your bar's cant-look-tall like they were "sitting"
Leave..jos barly-breathin-heavin..dude dead best-be-belivin leave this man...
"Defeated" leave this whole battle-scene-heated like you upset..like-children-wheppin
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Old 03-11-2008, 02:54 AM   #5
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Re: jos1 vs arko

can't match me mentally dude, make sure you're credentials are scooped
after i beat you over and over like instrumentals on loop

alright

guess you meant to be rude, so watch close as i roam the dark
the capture and burn this bitch, like Joan of arc

weak

then stone ya heart, slash your back and shock your front
beer here for a year so i guess this loss starts your sophmore slump

average


Hold it... you'll never link-bar's-like astronaurts finding-life-on MAR'S
Stop! ya-not-hittin like ya face on rw's ya just-not-FITTIN


thats some nice rhyming u got going on there

Like ya-written's cause il shatter ya face-tastin pain~bitten
Stand up! cause your bar's cant-look-tall like they were "sitting"

fantastic

Leave..jos barly-breathin-heavin..dude dead best-be-belivin leave this man...
"Defeated" leave this whole battle-scene-heated like you upset..like-children-wheppin

KO finish..brilliant


in case u havent figured it out i was being sarcastic in my review of arkos verse..that may have been the worst piece of garbage ive ever seen this shit didnt even rhyme nor make any sense whatsoever..just trash all the way through..
jos1 is the victor basically by default
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Old 03-11-2008, 10:01 AM   #6
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Re: jos1 vs arko

you talk absoulte shit
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Old 03-11-2008, 12:21 PM   #7
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Re: jos1 vs arko

Jos1 -
Quote:
can't match me mentally dude, make sure you're credentials are scooped
after i beat you over and over like instrumentals on loop
decent opener... wording coulda set it up a little better

Quote:
guess you meant to be rude, so watch close as i roam the dark
the capture and burn this bitch, like Joan of arc
nah... wasnt hitting too good here

[quote]then stone ya heart, slash your back and shock your front
beer here for a year so i guess this loss starts your sophmore slump[quote]

not good....

Arko -
Quote:
Hold it... you'll never link-bar's-like astronaurts finding-life-on MAR'S
Stop! ya-not-hittin like ya face on rw's ya just-not-FITTIN
didnt rhyme... no punch

Quote:
Like ya-written's cause il shatter ya face-tastin pain~bitten
Stand up! cause your bar's cant-look-tall like they were "sitting"
putting-dashes-in-your-text-doesnt-make-it-a-multi.... the concept of the punch was there, tho generic, if it were worded better, maybe it woulda been more effective

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Leave..jos barly-breathin-heavin..dude dead best-be-belivin leave this man...
"Defeated" leave this whole battle-scene-heated like you upset..like-children-wheppin
focused too much on the flow, w/o considering the structure and the punch...
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punches - Jos1
personals - neither
name/wordplay - neither
flow - Arko
structure - Jos1
wit/creativity - eh, Jos1, if any

overall, this was a pretty weak battle to say the least.... Arko, you need to focus on your punches rather then multis and flow... Jos1, you got potential... make your punches a little more direct w/ some personals...

and also, STFU IronLung...

w/ all ^that^ said....

VOTE: JOS1
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Old 03-11-2008, 12:35 PM   #8
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Re: jos1 vs arko

this is being closed due to jos1 missin deadline anyway so...take that onboard also stfu ironlung go dickride else were
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Old 03-11-2008, 01:34 PM   #9
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Re: jos1 vs arko

lol are you serious? wow you gave me little to no time, i posted as soon as i saw you set it up i didn't have time to actually think about anything i just put it up and if i did miss the deadline why did you post anyway? this is not being closed
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Old 03-11-2008, 01:47 PM   #10
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yall both posted well b4 the deadline... i dunno what he's talking about 2-0 Jos1
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