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Old 03-29-2008, 02:19 PM   #1
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Old 03-31-2008, 12:57 AM   #3
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Yo Dun, are you gonna check on this.....
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me setting it up should've been a check-in enough...


I'm actually about to post right now....

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Re: Weight-Class Match: DunLo Vs. PiOneer

He 'has no sole' like 'beat sneakers'....TUN IS NOW WEAK, besides for it's 2 discreet leaders, (War & Ak...)
The staff has no heat seekers....so I'll leave 'PiOneer blown-out', like being confused with 'cheap speakers'!,
You'll fumble; than stumble trippin' too...Pio is fake, so his Realness is slippin' through, never his writtens grew...
Part of a foribidden crew....so the reason I 'type ....Peace', is cause that's your form when I 'Get Dun; Rippin' You'!,
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=118383(Wink Wink Fagarina P...)
He should be a noob with his number post rep...been here for years!, but Neer's in a wonder close wrecked...
'Asleep' like a 'slumber dose set'...so his 'time put in' is like 'signing with Talib', cuz still he's 'Under Mos(t), Def.'!!,
You inactive as hell, so it's hard to tell you claim vet status....a 'Textcee'?!, YOUR EVEN LESS, faggot...
Get left with stressed static....cuz you 'hold No-Weight; Neer' here, that's why your not even 'assigned a text bracket'!,
(Are you Heavy-Weight?, Middle-Weight?, What the fuck are you??!)

One more to finish this chump....

'My wealth' you couldn't 'afford', lame....waiting for the jabs, but suddenly the sword came...
Hand you 'Buck-Fifty' like a 'Ford-Frame'...cuz you had '5 chances to punch', but couldn't 'Connect 4' with a 'board game'....

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Yo, just seeing this, I'll be posting soon as I get back home.
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Old 03-31-2008, 08:42 PM   #7
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Can’t find a fatted calf, watch me break this cat in half, seems TUN’s prodigal son is back,
But Dun’s pa musta been MumRa, a coward under raps plus he’s fighting a Thundercat,

Guess you wanna scrap, bringing rhymes from the junkyard, think this punk’s hard?
I’m solid TUN, you’re not brolic Dun, just sub-par getting punched out like a lunch card,

Is this Soda Popinsky here going against me? Undisputed what? Don’t try to convince me,
You suck hard, but if they had a belt for that, it’d be round the waist of Ms. Lewinsky,

Think this Stefani? No Doubt I’m cuttin Lo’s out, til your playlist ain’t nothing but treble,
This battle, like your claim to greatness is bassless, I got the heads readjusting your level, (Stuff funny?; base=bass)

Get a lonely plot if placing pi lower than the one spot, I’ll leave this queer sleeping truly,
The only thought: "'Neer cursed and Dun’s top" was dreamed in the cheerleading movie, (Near Kirsten Dunst's top)


Btw.... you should understand everything without the links, but I was bored so I put them in anyway. Knock yourself out if you want to.
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Re: Weight-Class Match: DunLo Vs. PiOneer

Dude don't use the links next time...
*sigh*

Punches- DunLo... Transitioned better and werent as forced as his opponents...

Personals- DunLo... no explanation necessary

Multies- DunLo... again no explanation needed

Creativity- DunLo... personal punches and multie usage was on point through out the verse... used every category effectively

Nameplay- DunLo...

Flow/Structure- Pioneer simply cuz it was spaced out and easier to read

Complexity- DunLo..

Enjoyment- DunLo... Overall was actually a battle verse.. not just a bunch of pictures being used as a forced attempt to make sense

Humour-- Pioneer... the links were so fucking stupid they were funny... but if you do that shit again it wont work in your favor

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^^^ You obviously can't read. As I said in my post, none of the pictures are necessary to understand the verse. If you don't like links, then don't click them. It's really more of an aid for noobs that don't understand wordplay then anything else. Did you even read my verse?

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Old 04-01-2008, 11:50 AM   #10
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Dunny -
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He 'has no sole' like 'beat sneakers'....TUN IS NOW WEAK, besides for it's 2 discreet leaders, (War & Ak...)
The staff has no heat seekers....so I'll leave 'PiOneer blown-out', like being confused with 'cheap speakers'!,
decent punch... nice opener

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You'll fumble; than stumble trippin' too...Pio is fake, so his Realness is slippin' through, never his writtens grew...
Part of a foribidden crew....so the reason I 'type ....Peace', is cause that's your form when I 'Get Dun; Rippin' You'!,
this was aight...

Quote:
He should be a noob with his number post rep...been here for years!, but Neer's in a wonder close wrecked...
'Asleep' like a 'slumber dose set'...so his 'time put in' is like 'signing with Talib', cuz still he's 'Under Mos(t), Def.'!!,
nice use of multis.. solid punch

Quote:
You inactive as hell, so it's hard to tell you claim vet status....a 'Textcee'?!, YOUR EVEN LESS, faggot...
Get left with stressed static....cuz you 'hold No-Weight; Neer' here, that's why your not even 'assigned a text bracket'!,
eh, i got mixed feelings about this bar.. it woulda been hotter if you werent the one that actually set the matches, na mean?

Quote:
'My wealth' you couldn't 'afford', lame....waiting for the jabs, but suddenly the sword came...
Hand you 'Buck-Fifty' like a 'Ford-Frame'...cuz you had '5 chances to punch', but couldn't 'Connect 4' with a 'board game'....
sick use of multis... punches was pretty funny...

Pio -

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Can’t find a fatted calf, watch me break this cat in half, seems TUN’s prodigal son is back,
But Dun’s pa musta been MumRa, a coward under raps plus he’s fighting a Thundercat,
not really feeling this opener... and the MumRa link isnt working but i dont understand how it relates to this battle, feel me?

Quote:
Guess you wanna scrap, bringing rhymes from the junkyard, think this punk’s hard?
I’m solid TUN, you’re not brolic Dun, just sub-par getting punched out like a lunch card,
Guess you wanna scrap, bringing rhymes from the junkyard, think this punk’s hard?
I’m solid TUN, you’re not brolic Dun, just sub-par getting punched out like a lunch card,
[/quote]

the links on here were necessary and i think it was used pretty well... nice bar

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Is this Soda Popinsky here going against me? Undisputed what? Don’t try to convince me,
You suck hard, but if they had a belt for that, it’d be round the waist of Ms. Lewinsky,
nah, Monica Lewinsky lines arent effective any more.... too long after the fact to be used

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Think this Stefani? No Doubt I’m cuttin Lo’s out, til your playlist ain’t nothing but treble,
This battle, like your claim to greatness is bassless, I got the heads readjusting your level
eh, this was aight.. wasnt too hard hitting but wasnt weak, na mean?

Quote:
Get a lonely plot if placing pi lower than the one spot, I’ll leave this queer sleeping truly,
The only thought: "'Neer cursed and Dun’s top" was dreamed in the cheerleading movie
forced wordplay and didnt make much sense..

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personals - Dun
name/wordplay - tie
flow - Pio
structure - Pio
wit/creativity - Dun

overall, this was a decent battle... Pio, your links got annoying after a while... reason being, most of them were unnecessary, i understand you addressed that but it makes your punches seem forced... Dun was consistant - had a few iffy lines but overall he came a little harder imo...

w/ all ^that^ said

VOTE: DUNLO

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