Text Turmoil Round 1:DunLo Vs. Catastrophe1

[DunLo]

First Round Will Be 5 Bars....
Second Round, (If Made), Requires 7 Bars....
And if you make it to the Championship it will consist of 10 bars...

No Biting, Recycling, Dickrding....Pretty much No to anything with 'Ing' at the end of it...

No Crew Votes....

Verses are Due by Sunday, July 6th Due to the Up-Coming weekend and I also Switched a few battles around....

Good Luck to all contestants....

[Catastrophe1]

check. ay I don't need a week for 5 petty bars, I can drop that in 20 minutes. Let's drop close to the same time so there's no "read'n the utha person's verse before I write my own verse" advantage. Let me kno when ur ready.

[Catastrophe1]

scratch what I said above....i'm too impatient, ha!

fuck it i'm drop'n now.....

ya TRASH AND YA BARS FRAIL! ya face get'n more "SMACK" THAN A CARTEL!
snatch this D-Lo fag "out da closet" like i'm HAVE'N A YARD SALE!!!
Catastrophe-won..."de-feet'n"-this-"misfit", deCREASE YA PERSISTANCE
when "Catastrophe's-done," D-will-be-listed for "FEMA'S ASSISTANCE"!!!!
ASK'N THESE MEN NEXT, is it gay to hit da SACK WIT YA TWIN? YES!!!
"fake thug"...DunLo only "sleeps wit AK'Z" when they're PRACTICE'N "INCEST"!!!!
weak-competitor, YOUR BARS ARE PLAYED AS SHIT...ur meat-to-predators
"C's-ahead-of-ya"...i don't see "D" like "rePORT CARDS FROM ASIAN KIDS"!!!
"chew'n D up" like "Vitamins" so i GOTTA BE "HEALTHY"
who lost?? you'll hear "Dunny" more than on PRODIGY'S L-P!!!

[DunLo]

Jimmy White Line....
Your Gayness Deserves Infraction - Pennsylvania Brotherly Love? These Fags Should Quit Rappin,
Cause Akeliz Constantly Visits "The Gap Of Dunloe" - And He Aint Even Been Near The Ireland Attraction


Snale's Line.....
Get merked or get smothered, dude came out like this? Looks like his mom gave birth to a monster!
gangsta ha, the only time Dun grippin 'AKs' is when he's jerkin his brother

And Now Your Line....
ASK'N THESE MEN NEXT, is it gay to hit da SACK WIT YA TWIN? YES!!!
"fake thug"...DunLo only "sleeps wit AK'Z" when they're PRACTICE'N "INCEST"!!!!

Can You Say 'Chomp-Chomp'?....

Fuck It, Kill This Lame....


It's Too Easy To Smoke this Noob...Hand Him The L, An Let Him Pick A Flavor To Choose....
He'll Waver through Dues....So I'll really 'Help Him Out This Tourny', Seeing as He's 'Favored To Lose'!!,
Your Wrap-Sheet Isn't That-Deep....The World Of Rap's Black-Sheep....
He's Past-Week...So I'll 'Wipe The Floor With Him', And Make It a Literal 'Cat-Sweep'!,
Look as the Cloud Spawns...25 views, but your not the reason a crowd dawns....
Get hit with loud bombs...That's Why 'Trophe's On The Shelf', like 'Kids With Proud Moms'!,

Catastrophe1 InformationMember Since06-05-2008Homepagerapbb.comOccupationCrush'n all compZodiacLeo
^^This is sinister or crazy!!...Like The 'Zodiac Killer', and it doesn't blister or phase me....
His Writtens don't whisper for safety...So I'll leave this 'Leo;Departed', Like I'm 'Mr. Scorsese'!,
It's evident that Dun Tower....Shit, this '0-1' was Done in One-Hour!!...
Watch as Son Cower...And I make his Record 'C-O-2', Like 'B.B. Gun Power'!!*

*See 0-2

Rest Should Be Self Explainatory....

R.I.P...

[Catastrophe1]

yo wtf up wit that jimmywhite and snale line shit?? I mean....if it's grimey like that I shoulda but up snale's "trophies in the closet" line or the million and one cat lines....smh @ played battle tactics...whateva homie

up'n 4 votes people...

[.iLL Thoughts..]

DUNLO

It's Too Easy To Smoke this Noob...Hand Him The L, An Let Him Pick A Flavor To Choose....
He'll Waver through Dues....So I'll really 'Help Him Out This Tourny', Seeing as He's 'Favored To Lose'!!,
nice decent bar 3/5


Your Wrap-Sheet Isn't That-Deep....The World Of Rap's Black-Sheep....
He's Past-Week...So I'll 'Wipe The Floor With Him', And Make It a Literal 'Cat-Sweep'!,
good name play... 3/5
Look as the Cloud Spawns...25 views, but your not the reason a crowd dawns....
Get hit with loud bombs...That's Why 'Trophe's On The Shelf', like 'Kids With Proud Moms'!,
NICE... 4/5
Catastrophe1 InformationMember Since06-05-2008Homepagerapbb.comOccupationCrush'n all compZodiacLeo
^^This is sinister or crazy!!...Like The 'Zodiac Killer', and it doesn't blister or phase me....
His Writtens don't whisper for safety...So I'll leave this 'Leo;Departed', Like I'm 'Mr. Scorsese'!,
hot 4/5
It's evident that Dun Tower....Shit, this '0-1' was Done in One-Hour!!...
Watch as Son Cower...And I make his Record 'C-O-2', Like 'B.B. Gun Power'!!*
ehh ok wasnt really feelin it 3/5

17/25


CAT
ya TRASH AND YA BARS FRAIL! ya face get'n more "SMACK" THAN A CARTEL!
snatch this D-Lo fag "out da closet" like i'm HAVE'N A YARD SALE!!!
decent bar.. 3/5

Catastrophe-won..."de-feet'n"-this-"misfit", deCREASE YA PERSISTANCE
when "Catastrophe's-done," D-will-be-listed for "FEMA'S ASSISTANCE"!!!!
ehh not really feelin 2/5

ASK'N THESE MEN NEXT, is it gay to hit da SACK WIT YA TWIN? YES!!!
"fake thug"...DunLo only "sleeps wit AK'Z" when they're PRACTICE'N "INCEST"!!!!
nice hahah 4/5

weak-competitor, YOUR BARS ARE PLAYED AS SHIT...ur meat-to-predators
"C's-ahead-of-ya"...i don't see "D" like "rePORT CARDS FROM ASIAN KIDS"!!!
didnt really rhyme or flow but nice attempt 3/5..

"chew'n D up" like "Vitamins" so i GOTTA BE "HEALTHY"
who lost?? you'll hear "Dunny" more than on PRODIGY'S L-P!!!
ehh 2/5

14/25

Flow-Dunlo
Punches-Dunlo
Multies-tie
Metaphors-Cat
Personals-Dunlo
Wordplay-Dunlo
Complexity-Cat
Creativity-Dunlo
Enjoyment-tie

Overall -Dunlo... imo he just had a stronger verse better punches.. a nice flow... but cat didnt do bback... and it wasnt a blow out he didnt get murdered.... good battle from both of you

Vote -Dunlo

[DunLo]

Originally Posted by Catastrophe1

yo wtf up wit that jimmywhite and snale line shit?? I mean....if it's grimey like that I shoulda but up snale's "trophies in the closet" line or the million and one cat lines....smh @ played battle tactics...whateva homie

up'n 4 votes people...

Lmao, ^^That's Called Swaying....But I Won't Delete it, I'll let you speak your Mind....And My Trophe Line Was Nothing Like Snales, Your Line was Identical just worded differently....

Don't Catch E-Feelings Homie, It's just a text battle....Shit, I didn't know it was that serious.....

Smh @ Played Battle Tactics is right, such as the quote at the top of this post...


Thanks for the breakdown WC, 1-0 Dunny....Ups....

[R!canTheoryz]

DUNLO
It's Too Easy To Smoke this Noob...Hand Him The L, An Let Him Pick A Flavor To Choose....
He'll Waver through Dues....So I'll really 'Help Him Out This Tourny', Seeing as He's 'Favored To Lose'!!,
Decent Opener ..


Your Wrap-Sheet Isn't That-Deep....The World Of Rap's Black-Sheep....
He's Past-Week...So I'll 'Wipe The Floor With Him', And Make It a Literal 'Cat-Sweep'!,
Solid Nameplay ..
Look as the Cloud Spawns...25 views, but your not the reason a crowd dawns....
Get hit with loud bombs...That's Why 'Trophe's On The Shelf', like 'Kids With Proud Moms'!,
lol This Was Cool ..
Catastrophe1 InformationMember Since06-05-2008Homepagerapbb.comOccupationCrush'n all compZodiacLeo
^^This is sinister or crazy!!...Like The 'Zodiac Killer', and it doesn't blister or phase me....
His Writtens don't whisper for safety...So I'll leave this 'Leo;Departed', Like I'm 'Mr. Scorsese'!,
Good Linkage Here, Well Connection Good Punch ..
It's evident that Dun Tower....Shit, this '0-1' was Done in One-Hour!!...
Watch as Son Cower...And I make his Record 'C-O-2', Like 'B.B. Gun Power'!!*
Nah You Fell Off Here .. Whack Closer


CAT
ya TRASH AND YA BARS FRAIL! ya face get'n more "SMACK" THAN A CARTEL!
snatch this D-Lo fag "out da closet" like i'm HAVE'N A YARD SALE!!!
Decent Opener ..

Catastrophe-won..."de-feet'n"-this-"misfit", deCREASE YA PERSISTANCE
when "Catastrophe's-done," D-will-be-listed for "FEMA'S ASSISTANCE"!!!!
Multis Were Cool, Punch Needs Better Wording

ASK'N THESE MEN NEXT, is it gay to hit da SACK WIT YA TWIN? YES!!!
"fake thug"...DunLo only "sleeps wit AK'Z" when they're PRACTICE'N "INCEST"!!!!
Your Best Bar^

weak-competitor, YOUR BARS ARE PLAYED AS SHIT...ur meat-to-predators
"C's-ahead-of-ya"...i don't see "D" like "rePORT CARDS FROM ASIAN KIDS"!!!
lol This Was Also Decent.

"chew'n D up" like "Vitamins" so i GOTTA BE "HEALTHY"
who lost?? you'll hear "Dunny" more than on PRODIGY'S L-P!!!
Nah Weak Closer ..


Overall -Dunlo... He Was more Consistent with the nameplays, and punches .. so he gets my vote .. good battle to both .

Vote -Dunlo

[Catastrophe1]

not catch'n "e-feelings" at all...this is a hobby so I could care less. I jus think what u did is an OBVIOUS attempt to sway...see'n as how that was supposed to diminish the effect of my punch...and that's wrong in my opinion. but no beef or hatred on my part at all homie....

0-2...up'n

[TheRealestOne]

DUN

It's Too Easy To Smoke this Noob...Hand Him The L, An Let Him Pick A Flavor To Choose....
He'll Waver through Dues....So I'll really 'Help Him Out This Tourny', Seeing as He's 'Favored To Lose'!!
decent 3/5
Your Wrap-Sheet Isn't That-Deep....The World Of Rap's Black-Sheep....
He's Past-Week...So I'll 'Wipe The Floor With Him', And Make It a Literal 'Cat-Sweep'!,
nice line 4/5. lol
Look as the Cloud Spawns...25 views, but your not the reason a crowd dawns....
Get hit with loud bombs...That's Why 'Trophe's On The Shelf', like 'Kids With Proud Moms'!,
NICE... 3/5
Catastrophe1 InformationMember Since06-05-2008Homepagerapbb.comOccupationCrush'n all compZodiacLeo
^^This is sinister or crazy!!...Like The 'Zodiac Killer', and it doesn't blister or phase me....
His Writtens don't whisper for safety...So I'll leave this 'Leo;Departed', Like I'm 'Mr. Scorsese'!,
tight line 3/5
It's evident that Dun Tower....Shit, this '0-1' was Done in One-Hour!!...
Watch as Son Cower...And I make his Record 'C-O-2', Like 'B.B. Gun Power'!!*
straight line again 3/5

16/25

CAT

ya TRASH AND YA BARS FRAIL! ya face get'n more "SMACK" THAN A CARTEL!
snatch this D-Lo fag "out da closet" like i'm HAVE'N A YARD SALE!!!
ehh..its aiight 3/5
Catastrophe-won..."de-feet'n"-this-"misfit", deCREASE YA PERSISTANCE
when "Catastrophe's-done," D-will-be-listed for "FEMA'S ASSISTANCE"!!!!
i dunno 2/5
ASK'N THESE MEN NEXT, is it gay to hit da SACK WIT YA TWIN? YES!!!
"fake thug"...DunLo only "sleeps wit AK'Z" when they're PRACTICE'N "INCEST"!!!!
nice straight 3/5
weak-competitor, YOUR BARS ARE PLAYED AS SHIT...ur meat-to-predators
"C's-ahead-of-ya"...i don't see "D" like "rePORT CARDS FROM ASIAN KIDS"!!!
Got the concept but not the best wording 3/5..
"chew'n D up" like "Vitamins" so i GOTTA BE "HEALTHY"
who lost?? you'll hear "Dunny" more than on PRODIGY'S L-P!!!
Straight line. not to good of a closer 2/5

13/25

Vote- Dun