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Old 07-22-2008, 08:15 PM   #1
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Old 07-22-2008, 08:38 PM   #2
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Re: Topical Md-EX V. MalikMontana

Ok then
Whats the topic?
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Old 07-22-2008, 08:40 PM   #3
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Free topic we both do our own
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Old 07-22-2008, 08:43 PM   #4
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Oh uh ok
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Old 07-23-2008, 04:35 PM   #5
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My Topic is suicide
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http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...=1#post1642877
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=125595
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Old 07-23-2008, 08:14 PM   #6
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It's so cold life I can't stand it
It just fucks me over every chance it gets GODDAMNIT
As I sit here by this window as the rain splatters
I give life a thought and wonder if it all matters?
Fuck my wife shes a BITCH and my boss is a jerk
And I hate those smug motherfuckers at work
She screwed me over
She never really loved me
Soul sucking demon
My joy was all she ever wanted from me
This white room Clothes strewn about the floor one desk
A bed with one pillow
I need to light a cigarette I'm so stressed
Then I look over and remember there's a gun under the dresser
And I break out in sobs body wracking cires
The look on my moms face
Where she hears her son died
of a self inflicted wound...
A bullet right between the eyes
But I say fuck it, no bullet imma make this bitch pay
I want my soul to haunt her for the rest of her days
So I grab my keys Hop in my car
Turn on the radio station
Shit! They've got that bullshit souljaboy playin
I turn it off and concentrate.
But there's no need to
I already know exactly what I'm gonna do
This'll get here, There'll be no one for her to screw
Shift the gear to park on the train tracks
Hop out and yell "MIRANDA FUCK YOU!"
It's so cold and dreary
Rains still pourin down
It masks my tears
It hide my fears...
Cuz I know I'm gonna leave here
So I write a little note
"Fuck you Miranda FUCK YOU
I'm so sorry mom..I really love you
I made this choice as a man and a adult
If your sad blame miranda
IT'S ALL THAT BITCHES FAULT!!
Goin out my way, It'll be the last thing I ever did
But most of all im sorry, to my two beautiful kids"
I put it on the ground a few feet back. I'm Done
It's crazy how I almost smile when I hear the train come
Sittin in my car, Spite is my motive
Could give a FUCK as i stare at the locomotive
And then I start to realize whats about to happen and i start to cry
I've got nothing left to live for So I choose to die
The trains meters away
I light one last sig
Wish I had some Vodka so i could take one last swig
So as I lay my life down on these train tracks
I think that-
*The sound of metal screeching and being wrenched apart echos through the air*
...Black...






Well thats my drop
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Old 07-23-2008, 09:03 PM   #7
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Put me in the system and beat me black and blue
so i can live for my music and die for it too
Kilking myself so silent for hope of a new day
worlds fade to gray, passing demonic parades
Sorrowful symphonies sung on my streets daily execution
into the abyss of darkness go our dreams of revolution
to even out the playing field we add to noise pollution
still no resolution or diffusion in search of the conclusion
Cops still bruising
they find it amusing
can't win for losing
The daily races going nowhere horses forced to comply
you can't defy or deny with blinders upon your eyes
We're up for buy, modern slaves, promise goes awry
Those who refuse to abide, hide from the worldwide genocide
Bury my microphone pen and paper to drive me away
and tell the stories of the streets some other day
Rip my spine out and write my will in my own blood
torture, brutalize, aganize, take it all away with one thud
So the tales of an American Baby will last this last flood
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Old 07-23-2008, 09:04 PM   #8
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Oh topic and title is American Baby : Like a rose from concrete
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Old 07-23-2008, 09:29 PM   #9
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Re: Topical Md-EX V. MalikMontana

I have no idea what that is at all but okay
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Old 07-23-2008, 09:57 PM   #10
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Re: Topical Md-EX V. MalikMontana

This is kinda hard to vote on since they're not on the same topic, but I'll try my best... And also, you should always say what the voting criteria is at the beginning of the battle

Imagery: MalikMontana (while MD had metaphorical imagery, it wasn't really imagery per say)
metas: MD-Ex
vocab: MD-Ex
depth: n/a (two completely different types of pieces on different topics which don't even allow for the same ammount of depth... can't really vote on this one)
multis: MD-Ex by a little bit...
flow: tie
enjoyment: tie

O/A: MD-Ex

Both came with solid verses that were good in their own right but MD-Ex got more of the mechanics down then MalikMontana did... Decent topical battle
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