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Old 08-03-2008, 06:56 PM   #1
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Snale vs Dunlo

5 bars.

Pm me when your ready to post and we'll post.

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Old 08-06-2008, 01:06 AM   #2
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Re: Snale vs Dunlo

goodluck...




Elevate? Nah it's 'too late' his punches barely hittin. But dude will find a way to cheat a win - rw's bearing witness
Dunlo and Ak's battles 'always close early' like they set daytime hours for the family business


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LOL^ prime examples. Anyway nice sig, but yo.....

Dun's not even an obstacle so forget factors, i'll throw dude off a building so his head shatters..
Ha<-But all jokes aside, i'm contemplating throwing dun off the 'Ledge or, not' like brainstorming with dead actors


.Uppercuts will have this hick going the wrong route, leaving his talent like 'clumsy confederates' caused to 'fall south'
Ducking? Nah Dunny's just acting like he was ill as 'Another head'
....That's why he's having 'Second thoughts' on who he called out!


This fucker aint ready, i'll put you through hell, before you get slumber in heaven.
Punches? You'll never see Dunny throw 'one after another' like he had a phobia of the number eleven


I know you don't mean to 'sway' like you the best at it, Dude's just got too big of an ego to keep his head balanced.
it's Ironic to too see this 'pulse hating' on a good verse, when in fact he's just Dead talent






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2-play off his sig
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Old 08-06-2008, 03:26 PM   #3
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You said you were ready yesterday, so if you can drop tonight.
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Old 08-06-2008, 05:15 PM   #4
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LMAO!!...This Kid?!?!....




And I fell Off?!.....

Patrick Bateman is back, take Notes.....

Honestly....
Hype outweighs his Skill....So After this Kill even YOUR dickriders will say I ripped this man again...
Decided to Withstand the trend...Cuz his style?, Simply 'Jen;Eric', like 'Mr. Bana Dating Miss Aniston'!,
So Your Swag?, too repetitive....and your sedative is only basic revolving pre-rations....
So 'Try-Angles' in 'Rounds'....or I'll leave '(E)Mc(EE) squared' without 'Solving Equations'!!,
His spot on our roster is Past useless....Went back to 'A Nullifer' and became the last to crew switch....
Begged his way back in Ruthless...Cuz he realized U.L. 'Bossed;Tun', like a 'City in Massachusetts'!!,
(Sorry Reagan!, No offense Homie!!...)


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^^^ Please Homie Don't get your head-Hype...All of these useless posts, we wish you would instead write!...
Your Ego's made your Threads-Blight...So I'll 'Put In Work;For-Um', since he can't even get 'Hired by a Web-Site'!,
You fooled us all by claiming to be savage at text....but I'll let the voters ravage that bet....
Revoke your status as vet....Because your easy to 'C,-Plus' that only makes you 'Average At Best'!

Self-Explainatory....Last bar, a C+ is average but the best....and also 'See, Plus'.....yadiyadaya.....

Now get in time-out, Wackling....
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Old 08-06-2008, 05:46 PM   #5
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alrighty than, upping for votes.
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Old 08-06-2008, 05:51 PM   #6
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I don't care if it doesn't count, this is what the ACTUAL breakdown of this battle is.

Elevate? Nah it's 'too late' his punches barely hittin. But dude will find a way to cheat a win - rw's bearing witness
Dunlo and Ak's battles 'always close early' like they set daytime hours for the family business
^weak punch, reach for the connection.

Dun's not even an obstacle so forget factors, i'll throw dude off a building so his head shatters..
Ha<-But all jokes aside, i'm contemplating throwing dun off the 'Ledge or, not' like brainstorming with dead actors
^wack.

.Uppercuts will have this hick going the wrong route, leaving his talent like 'clumsy confederates' caused to 'fall south'
Ducking? Nah Dunny's just acting like he was ill as 'Another head'
....That's why he's having 'Second thoughts' on who he called out!
^wack.

This fucker aint ready, i'll put you through hell, before you get slumber in heaven.
Punches? You'll never see Dunny throw 'one after another' like he had a phobia of the number eleven
^wtf? one of the weakest punches I've seen by you.. that is a horrible concept.

I know you don't mean to 'sway' like you the best at it, Dude's just got too big of an ego to keep his head balanced.
it's Ironic to too see this 'pulse hating' on a good verse, when in fact he's just Dead talent
^weak double connection, not feeling.

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Hype outweighs his Skill....So After this Kill even YOUR dickriders will say I ripped this man again...
Decided to Withstand the trend...Cuz his style?, Simply 'Jen;Eric', like 'Mr. Bana Dating Miss Aniston'!,
^too simple, dont like it.
So Your Swag?, too repetitive....and your sedative is only basic revolving pre-rations....
So 'Try-Angles' in 'Rounds'....or I'll leave '(E)Mc(EE) squared' without 'Solving Equations'!!,
^wack.
His spot on our roster is Past useless....Went back to 'A Nullifer' and became the last to crew switch....
Begged his way back in Ruthless...Cuz he realized U.L. 'Bossed;Tun', like a 'City in Massachusetts'!!,
(Sorry Reagan!, No offense Homie!!...)
^wack.

Snale FOR MOD!!!
^^^ Please Homie Don't get your head-Hype...All of these useless posts, we wish you would instead write!...
Your Ego's made your Threads-Blight...So I'll 'Put In Work;For-Um', since he can't even get 'Hired by a Web-Site'!,
^'um'? thats not a word. forced. although the concept was actually OK.
You fooled us all by claiming to be savage at text....but I'll let the voters ravage that bet....
Revoke your status as vet....Because your easy to 'C,-Plus' that only makes you 'Average At Best'!

^no, not good.

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O/V- Dunlo i guess?
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Old 08-06-2008, 08:55 PM   #9
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I said no dominate or Aero....No No can actually vote though, peace...
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Re: Snale vs Dunlo

first of all nice battle.....to both
alot of originality displayed....
NOW.......

SNALE's:
Elevate? Nah it's 'too late' his punches barely hittin. But dude will find a way to cheat a win - rw's bearing witness
Dunlo and Ak's battles 'always close early' like they set daytime hours for the family business
...nice personal..although if it woulda have been worded better i think that the punch behind it would have been more substantial

Dun's not even an obstacle so forget factors, i'll throw dude off a building so his head shatters..
Ha<-But all jokes aside, i'm contemplating throwing dun off the 'Ledge or, not' like brainstorming with dead actors
...kinda repetitive w/the off a building/off the ledge...but nice personal and punch

.Uppercuts will have this hick going the wrong route, leaving his talent like 'clumsy confederates' caused to 'fall south'
Ducking? Nah Dunny's just acting like he was ill as 'Another head'
....That's why he's having 'Second thoughts' on who he called out!
...nice wordplay both lines....just cant see the punch really here

This fucker aint ready, i'll put you through hell, before you get slumber in heaven.
Punches? You'll never see Dunny throw 'one after another' like he had a phobia of the number eleven
...nice punch originality like the flow also here

I know you don't mean to 'sway' like you the best at it, Dude's just got too big of an ego to keep his head balanced.
it's Ironic to too see this 'pulse hating' on a good verse, when in fact he's just Dead talent
...nice wordplay think that if this would have been worded better it woulda been more effective....flow kinda off just stopped abrupt to me..but a nice way to wrap up your verse...

CRITIQUE:
i think that your drop contained alot of original wordplay and contained alot of personals that were effective....the punches were here and there because of the wording some were less effective than others.....flow was on point up until the last bar....

DUN's:
Hype outweighs his Skill....So After this Kill even YOUR dickriders will say I ripped this man again...
Decided to Withstand the trend...Cuz his style?, Simply 'Jen;Eric', like 'Mr. Bana Dating Miss Aniston'!,
...nice flow..nice wordplay...but the punch seems missin

So Your Swag?, too repetitive....and your sedative is only basic revolving pre-rations....
So 'Try-Angles' in 'Rounds'....or I'll leave '(E)Mc(EE) squared' without 'Solving Equations'!!,
...nice punch and name play here...wordplay was on point also...but its kinda contradictory to your last bar because you said he was generic but now he has a repetitive swag...

His spot on our roster is Past useless....Went back to 'A Nullifer' and became the last to crew switch....
Begged his way back in Ruthless...Cuz he realized U.L. 'Bossed;Tun', like a 'City in Massachusetts'!!,
(Sorry Reagan!, No offense Homie!!...)
...nice personal and punch here...although Boston isnt the city its the Capital..and no offense taken

Snale FOR MOD!!!
^^^ Please Homie Don't get your head-Hype...All of these useless posts, we wish you would instead write!...
Your Ego's made your Threads-Blight...So I'll 'Put In Work;For-Um', since he can't even get 'Hired by a Web-Site'!,
...nice personal...had ta google 'blight'...not really worded for effective punch quality

You fooled us all by claiming to be savage at text....but I'll let the voters ravage that bet....
Revoke your status as vet....Because your easy to 'C,-Plus' that only makes you 'Average At Best'!
...nice closer nice flow.....nice wordplay

CRITIQUE:
you had alot of punches and personals..nice flow as usual...i think that you tried to cover the whole scope of battling here...some of the personals came off wrong imo but still got through.....

SIMILARITIES:
i think that you both really tried to push yourself (i applaud both)...but in doin so i think that you used the wrong wording to get your points across...both pulled no stops when it came to personals but then slacked sorta when it came to the punch....

OVERALL:
i think that this is a close as battle where i had to cancel out what you both did the same and then factor in the punch quality wordplay flow and multies...and in doin so i think that it clearly cancels out both ways EVERYTHING.....you dudes are both dope ass shit and in this one i tried to read it then let it marinate and then reread it to see who's really did it for me and i couldnt (sorry)....although it may seem like a cop out its not...i tried to follow what Snale has been helpin me with and what Dun helped me with in the past and in doin so i found this to be a tie....

VOTE: TIE..........
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