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Old 10-19-2006, 08:56 PM   #1
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Old 10-20-2006, 07:13 PM   #2
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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse

check...good luck man
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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse

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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse

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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=83055
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=82970

Quick key..got kids to feed.verse too.besides you...lol

Paint the Scene: (Harlem stands infront of the crowd, going face
to face against Lyrical Abuse; they crowd may witness
another case of another death by hand of harlem).


Im here to capture your first record loss,
your a lost cause, my throne calls,
watch your brain pause,
cuz when i spit its like my chain saws,
cuttin through bones raw,
improper clause, let your toungue fall, ur in AHH!
even in your "Lyrical Abuse" my men"tal" flows reign,
can you maintain? spray you with octane, ur stained,
formal "execution", simply by flooding your veins,
just go by your name: (put your name here )
you allow me to execute you in your own style now that's Lyrical Abuse,
i'll shed a tear for your sentiment,all the while you were raps detriment,
your rhymes are hesitant, and your topics irrelevant,
So i "beat" you with a led pipe til the iron bent
watch your body welt, only to have it melt,
flows are like burns, except its a "degree" you havent felt,
now your bones are cripple,
when the Doc asks can you move ur hands? u say just a little,
cant seem to solve this riddle?
It aint my fault your brittle, divide you through the middle,
split it in two axis, the fact is, only I have access,
throw you in a casket and flame u into ashes,
u must be a blunt cuz i lit you like some matches,
you made more excuses than anyone going to jail,
I'll set bail, when all left of your body fails,
another flawless victory, leave the battle with no scratches,
you were murdered before I ever had a chance to latch it!
!!!!Lyrical Abuse!!!!
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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse

ma rymes'll steal da win for me lik im robbin beats(
'LA's mor dangerous den harlem lik compton streets(los angelos)
lik a marry go round, ma rymes'll spin ya head
only time harlem got 'da(d) eagle' is in da bed(lol)
i take 'high definition' TVs lik i took yall screens
ill mak ya record a '49' lik playin fo football teams(his records 3-9)
he cant handle 'flames' n 'pressure' lik fire fighters(he beefin wit em)
hes attracted to 'da web' lik he admires spiders
erry1 nos da only thing in harlem dats 'big' is 'L'(big L)
its lik im deliverin computers,da way i giv da L/dell(dell computers)
i bring da heat to u rapworlds lik im da internet son(son gives heat)
but da heat is only startin to come lik da winter is done
u 'suck' mor den bitches,wen u rap da hood rats lauphin
aero said harlem u too sick.....if u think u good at rappin!(look at sig)
him winnin is lik wrestling fights...an obvious rigged event(wrestlings fake)
if evry shot counts as a loss,he got shot 9 times lik 50 cent
rymes'll take out ya eye,n u aint gonna catch me wit da lids
d eagle n harlem r 2 bitches,dey probly in da avy in his sig
dis fake dont got no 'forces' or 'pumps' lik ya got no kicks(nike air forces n nike pumps)
this is the ending,so ill finish him wit a lyrical appocolypse
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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse (0+ posts to vote)

Ahh

Flow-LA{his multis help boost his flow to be better}
Multis-LA{self explanatory its there}
Punches-Tie{Both were kinda cheezy..... but it tied
Personals-LA{Lyrical abuse, def got dis.... he had a shit load in his verse... dey werre everywhere}
Wordplay-LA{he had a few wordplay schemes in his verse}
Enjoyment-LA{cuz of his personals i liked his moe}

O/A:LYIRCAL ABUSE

its no hate jus wat it iz....
he had da better verse.. n he came wit it.... harlem u improvin G keep battlin n u'll rack up more wins

anyways explanatons up there

nuff said

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Flow-got give it to LA
Multis-LA he brought a lil more fyha
Punches-ima say a Tie

Personals-LA hands down
Wordplay-ima say a tie also
Enjoyment-LA he laid it down nice


O/A-La took it nice battle
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Re: Harlem vs. Lyrical Abuse (0+ posts to vote)

harlem:
Im here to capture your first record loss, your a lost cause, my throne calls,
watch your brain pause, cuz when i spit its like my chain saws,
^^^ i see ur setting something up so i'll save my opinion 'til we finally get to what ur building up too ... to waste 2 whole bars on it tho, this better be good...

cuttin through bones raw, improper clause, let your toungue fall, ur in AHH!
^^^ ur off by half-a-bar over a beat, fix ur flow ... was not worth the wait ... D b/c u made me wait so long for nothing

even in your "Lyrical Abuse" my men"tal" flows reign,
can you maintain? spray you with octane, ur stained,
^^^ ur just flowin at this point ... D

formal "execution", simply by flooding your veins,
just go by your name: (put your name here )
you allow me to execute you in your own style now that's Lyrical Abuse,
^^^ i guess this is a personal, i get the first one tho ... so i'll give u a C+ ... didnt like it tho personally

i'll shed a tear for your sentiment,all the while you were raps detriment,
your rhymes are hesitant, and your topics irrelevant,
So i "beat" you with a led pipe til the iron bent
^^^ u are doin some rhymin kid i give u that, but these were just jabs no hooks or uppercuts ... C+

watch your body welt, only to have it melt,
flows are like burns, except its a "degree" you havent felt,
^^^ ummm this is aiiiiight ... C

now your bones are cripple,
when the Doc asks can you move ur hands? u say just a little,
cant seem to solve this riddle?
It aint my fault your brittle, divide you through the middle,
^^^ u are wasting too many bars to set up weak punches ... C-

split it in two axis, the fact is, only I have access,
throw you in a casket and flame u into ashes,
u must be a blunt cuz i lit you like some matches,
^^^ aight getting a lil better ... B-

you made more excuses than anyone going to jail,
I'll set bail, when all left of your body fails,
^^^ ummm focus on ur words more than ur rhymes ... D

another flawless victory, leave the battle with no scratches,
you were murdered before I ever had a chance to latch it!
^^^ D for the forced multi & bad closer ... ur opener & closer shoudl be ur hardest bars & u just dropped the ball here.

#punches/couplets: 5/10
overall: D + D + (C+) + (C+) + C + (C-) + (B-) + D + D = C-


lyrical abuse
ma rymes'll steal da win for me lik im robbin beats
'LA's mor dangerous den harlem lik compton streets
^^^ haha truth in bars i like it even tho that first bar is forced ... B- decent opener

lik a marry go round, ma rymes'll spin ya head
only time harlem got 'da(d) eagle' is in da bed
^^^ don't know what u tryina set up here but i didnt like it ... C- for effort

i take 'high definition' TVs lik i took yall screens
ill mak ya record a '49' lik playin fo football teams
^^^ weaaak ... C- but at least u tried to punch

he cant handle 'flames' n 'pressure' lik fire fighters
hes attracted to 'da web' lik he admires spiders
^^^ haha aight much better, creative & personal ... A

erry1 nos da only thing in harlem dats 'big' is 'L'(big L)
its lik im deliverin computers,da way i giv da L/dell
^^^ 'L' and 'Dell' are TOTALLY different words ... C- only cuz the first bar was ok, but the second one sucked horribly

i bring da heat to u rapworlds lik im da internet son(son gives heat)
but da heat is only startin to come lik da winter is done
^^^ filler ... D

u 'suck' mor den bitches,wen u rap da hood rats lauphin
aero said harlem u too sick.....if u think u good at rappin!
^^^ attempt to flip a personal ... C

him winnin is lik wrestling fights...an obvious rigged event
if evry shot counts as a loss,he got shot 9 times lik 50 cent
^^^ hahahahaha ok ok A ... woulda been harder if u woulda left the second part of the bar implied but i like the idea & a personal

rymes'll take out ya eye,n u aint gonna catch me wit da lids
d eagle n harlem r 2 bitches,dey probly in da avy in his sig
^^^ ... whatever, D

dis fake dont got no 'forces' or 'pumps' lik ya got no kicks
this is the ending,so ill finish him wit a lyrical appocolypse
^^^ first bar is a good setup for something but the second bar is like ... ok ... u needed a punch after that but u didnt have one ... C

#punches/couplets: 9/10
overall: B- + C- + C- + A + C- + D + C + A + D + C = C+


FEEDBACK:
the grading shows the battle was closer than it actually was, i liked lyrical abuse's verse from the getgo because the structure was much better, they were bars not garble, easy to read, etc ... sometimes its about presentation ... but even without that, he not only had better punches generally, he also had more punches, which is the most important aspect of a BATTLE in general. 1 thing i didnt like abt L.A.'s verse was the explanations ... if u have to explain a bar, in most cases it prolly isn't good enough ... bars should stand alone wihtout explanation ... the exception, in text, is for "personals," since its not really personal usually since u dont know the person, but other than that, no ... perfect example was the Dell line. u shoulda know that by having to explain it & say "L/Dell", that it wasnt a strong enough punch ...

anyway

vote: lyrical abuse

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