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Old 03-10-2007, 02:19 PM   #1
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Old 03-10-2007, 02:49 PM   #2
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

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Old 03-10-2007, 08:31 PM   #3
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

Check, same to you squire
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Old 03-15-2007, 07:45 PM   #4
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

I spoke to Hades, and he needs a 24 hour extension. So we'll both be posting tomorrow if that's cool.
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Old 03-15-2007, 11:38 PM   #5
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

Sure Is If You Both Agreed... 2 Days To Post Now, Given The Extra Day For Docked Votes...
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

Death, Im Forever Enclosed In..Planetary Movements But Never Eroded.
I Take Life In My Hands, Then Proceed To Slash, Embevel And Mould It.

Death, Im Forever Enclosed In..Planetary Movements But Never Eroded.
I Take Life In My Hands, Then Proceed To Slash, Embevel And Mould It.

My Cloak Ripples And Swishes, Im Hotheaded And The Bane Of Death Wishes,
They're Both Bitches But Gods' Wrath Is Merciful Whilst Satans Is Vicious,
Delicious, Last I Stand, Forevermore I Hear The Sound Of The Task At Hand,
I Stay Hooded, To Avoid The Gasp Of Man, Time Doesn't Change Me, A Purged Partisan,
Im In Vast Demand, My Skulled Face Provides A Tremendous Horror To Behold,
Its Never Seen Though, Im Defending Honor, But There's No Need To Be Told,
My Fingers Are Scrawny, And Deaths Inevitable So Pay Heed, Don't Fight Bitch,
You Cannot Escape Me, I May Be All Bones.. But My Hip's Got No Light Arthritis.
You Could Be The Next Person, And Now Ive Had My Soliquay So Be Careful,
Its Known We All Have Stories To Tell.. So.Why Doesn't Death Deserve One?


*John F Kennedy Lies On The Harsh Ground Subconciously Taking In His Surroundings, He Finds It Getting Harder To Breathe When He Imagines A Figure.....*

''Who Are You..? And Tell Me Sir, Why Are You Cloaked.?''

''I Am Death Mr Kennedy.. And Know Now Your Life Is Revoked.
You Have Lived An Honest Life, Alas Your Death Was Provoked.
These Folk, The People? Ah You Should Have Signed To Ignore Them..
They Have Have No Voice.. And Yet You Tried To Support Them..!
And This Is Your Thanks, Now How Do You Feel About Your Life?
Was The Ultimate Struggle Worth It? Or The Endless Strife?
Don't Try To Fight, As I Ask This Question Of All My Clients,
I Despise Wit, And Although Many Cry, Not All Deny It.
No Shall You Try It?
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''Dear Death Or Mr Reaper, Ill Admit That I Feel No Remorse,
As I Merely Done My Job.. And Life As It Should, Took Its Course,
The Earth's Force, Could Not Tempt Me To Lie To The Nation..
I Had To Fight For Rights, To Try End Segregation..
Was I A Good Man? Was I Justifiably Good My Reverend??''

''Aye That You Were.. And You Shall Ascend To Heaven''

''The Ultimate Divorce, Life And Death, And Despite My Best..
I Shall Go On Peacefully.. And Enjoy The Slumber And Rest.''


*Its Munich And The War Is Ending.. Adolf Hitler Raises The Gun To His Head And Pulls The Trigger.. He Utters No Sound Yet A Figure Appears*

''Why Have You Disobeyed My Orders? I Will Have You Executed,
You Scruffy, Mangy Cur, Your Crime Shall Not Be Disputed!! ''
Are You Stupid? I Wish To Call Forth Death Himself!!
Yes Kill Myself, My Mind Is Failing With My Mental Health''

''Hush Child, For I Am He Who Was Beckoned..
Have You Not Put The Gun To Your Head.. Only Nought But A Second?
Its Reckoned, You Were A Tyrant And Ive Seen You Telling Lies,
But That Is Nothing Young Man, To The Disputed Act Of Genocide,
Your Dead Inside, A Heartless Monster That Shall Head To Satan,
My Decision Is Justified.. Evil?? Nay, You Surpass My Rating,
I Despise You, And That Has Not Happened Since Mr Napoleon,
I Wish To Take Your Sould, Clasp It And Then Hold It In,
Why Did You Do This..? Decide To Just Dictate A Nation..?
You Shall Now Answer Me.. And Then Head To Damnation..

''HA, I Laugh At You Now.. The Imposter Of Death..
Because I Know That My Path To Heaven..Was Already Set.
Its A Comedy Bet, You Question My Decision I Choose...?
Nay I Did Not Mean For Genocide, Just The Extinction Of The Jews,
Am I Not A Handsome Man? Does My Moustache Not Suit Me??

''Go To Hell Hitler... And Just Quit Tryin' To Seduce Me.''


*Mahatma Gandhi Lay On The Sandy Floor.. Totally At Peace.. He Saw A Figure And Smiled With Glee''

''Ahh.. Mr Reaper Himself, I Am Honored By Your Presence,
I Have Always Admire Your Steadfast Ways With Reverence,
I Hear God Calling Me, Is That Possible To Me..??
I Only Done For My Country.. What Only A Humble Man Would See..
What Is Your Judgment On Me Sir, How Do I Fare..
Did Jesus Admire My Work, Did Moses Care..??''

''Mahatma.. Your Death Was Premature, Its A Sham It Happened,
Your Countries Backbone Is Gone.. Your Support Has Slackened,
Mens Hearts Have Blackened, But Yes I Have Admired..
Whom You Have Approached And The People You Have Sired,
Never Had Aspirations To Rule.. But Only To Serve..
That My Noble Friend.. Is What Only The Best Deserve..
Your Heart Is Pure... And To Heaven I Shall Send You..
I Thank You For Greeting Me, And Farewell Too!

''I Thank You Death, Im Surprised Ive Reached Your Requirements,
I Thought Heaven Would Be Full With Kings Who Suffered Retirements,
Farewell..Perhaps We Shall Chat Among The Clouds..
And I Say A Prayer For My People.. Among Those Reckless Clouds..''


This Is A Portion Of My Life... And Its Split Into Segments.
Ive Hope You Enjoyed, Deaths Very First Impressions.

Death, Im Forever Enclosed In..Planetary Movements But Never Eroded.
I Take Life In My Hands, Then Proceed To Slash, Embevel And Mould It.

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The Mindstate of Death

Trapped in the purgatory of the after life, fate yet to be decided
I lie and wait....
Will I be rising into the silver clouds?
Or be falling into the depths of doom?
I truely believe that the unappreciated beauty of the clouds will never hit these savaged eyes again...


Extinguished eyes, realised my fractured soul was rebelling
Within an infinite nightmare, mind's scared and ever swelling
Harsh tones of death ring in my ears, as I listen in silence
To re-runs of my brutal life, marred by bloodshed and violence
I deserved to die, won't tell a lie, it was rightly justified
Just hope that fate can decide and this pain might be nullified
Because it's no surprise, that my demise, was indeed a blessing
But it's my idle mindstate that will need some addressing...

A sharp, cold wind attacks my idle body...

My broken body dents the ground, no sign of life to be found
Lack of sound... only lived to hear my folks say we're proud!
My spirit twists and is bound, eyes glazed staring into abyss
Helplessly stranded as fate's blade pierced through my bliss
No final kiss? My lips meet the icy breath of a skeletal figure
No final bit of remorse, he merely leans back and s******s
Blazed eyes shine, I'm terrified! As he whispers "You're mine..."
Fermented fruits squeeze out my life as I let out matured whines

The cloaked being raises an arm...

Bony digits invade my dome, and instantly I turn white
Not with fright! But the reality of a fully earned sight
The sight of Death, non-verbally forcing me to admit
That my spanning timeline was etched with blood and not grit
His claw-like fingers pierce my flesh, so our souls can entwine
Spirit fighting a lost battle, refuses to hold and resigns
And so the deed is signed, an entire life shown and surrendered
Death's hallowed figure rises, marvelling at his own splendour

The sealer of fate broodily rises and fades into the background of eternal misery...

The air warms and welcomes the absence of pestilent auras
Only too late do I see that fate isn't against us or for us
The Devil sings a chorus, when lives are but hung by a thread
And background has no importance, neglected, he'll rely on dread
For sustenance, and once astray, your soul will always be captured
Fear of fate? Perhaps, but a solemn glance and he'll only see raptures
Simmered warmth to boiling heat, my heart melts and sinks
Been on the edge too long, only now I've truely felt the brink

The final elongated breath of a broken man, before the plunge into despairity and relentless torment...

Union of mind, body and soul finally shatters in three
A safe passage to Hell, please! now all that matters to me
Inevitabilty...the word of choice used by these heathens
Emotionally blinded, this demon is not one who sees reason
My spirit falls further, the searing heat igniting my soul
Fear embodies my spirit, stricken panic is fighting control
Materialise eyes! Wake from slumber and embrace your fate!
The sight is frightening, but yet it borderlines on the great

Fountains of lava bathe in fire, minions shuffle and stare with eyes fixed...

Ghoulish atmosphere, filled with intoxicating scents of doom
A certain gloom, some walking wounded, with the rest in tombs
Reach the ground of the forsaken land, and suddenly silence
For a being approaches, and to make noise would cause violence
And there he was...the traitor! the heathen! the underground demon!
Could already sense that my omnipresent scars would now deepen
Carved from the flesh and bone of the wicked and maintained by hate
Legs tremble in awe, mind hopes without hope that the pain might wait
The demon speaks, "the worst is over, and now you can't deny fate!
So much emotion, yet without speech?! truly is death's mindstate"
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iigh hades told me to read his before Kron posted his and i gotta say i thought hed kill, but after reading Krons this is a very hard battle to judge


ON TOPIC - Tie (both had sum lines that were kinda ehh)

DEPTH - Tie (both seemed to have a lot of details)

IMAGERY - Tie (same here)

ORIGINALITY - Kron (on hades it seemed that aftyer reading certain parts it became predictable)

FLOW - None (i thought both people had too stretched lines, mabey cuz of the vocab used but still)

MULTIS - Kron

VOCAB - Kron (kron had a lot more usage when Hades seemed just at a comfortable stage)

vote - kron

funny these verses both had the same style it seemed only used in different ways
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Re: Rnd 4: Title Match: Kronologik Vs. ...Hades!

Ok i only jsut finished reading this.. took me long enough lol..
Anyways..

ON TOPIC - Tie (i felt both kept to topic quite well..)
DEPTH - Tie (Both had some really nice lines that set drop up nicely)
IMAGERY - Tie (Both dropped real nice lines.. lol like i said above^)
ORIGINALITY - Tie (I woulda have to say probably hardest subject to judge.. both dropped there own nice takes but they were similair i couldnt pick a clear winner very close)
FLOW - Tie (Like Pariah said.. i also seen stretched lines.. the push for multi filled verse kinda spoiled the flow both had there ups and downs)
MULTIS - Tie (Like i said above)
VOCAB - Tie (seriously both had some nice vocab)

Im going to go into this a little more.. I personally feel both had strong nad weak points.. im not a fan of multis to be honest.. i hate the fact that people are way to concerned on judging a drop by its multis.. theres ben nuerous time i have kept a steady flow with one or two multis and kept the drop deep nad full of imagery and depth yet lost because of multis.. so im in no way EVER judging any battle on who ahd the msot multis because its irrelevant and more or less showing off.. This is going to come down to imagery as its atopical and thats the main aspect of this battle.. and in my eyes after reading both i personally feel Hades had a more descriptive storylike feel to hsi drop and it was easier to picture the events.. And i guess thats my only reason for choosen him because this battle was too clsoe to call.. HOF this shit imo it was dope.. jsut chill on the multi use..

Vote - Hades (only just)

funny these verses both had the same style it seemed only used in different ways
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ON TOPIC: Tie, not much to say here..
DEPTH: Tie, Kron explained one story a littler deeper, but Hades had three different.
IMAGERY: Hades, but very very close. I think that using name such as JFK and Hilter help me get a certain picture/background in my head
ORIGINALITY: Ah... Both were pretty predictable after reading a verse or two
FLOW:
N/A, text doesn't have flow.
MULTIS:
Tie, Hades had more multis but were forced, Kron has smoother ones..
VOCAB:
Kron, was just more consisent, that's all

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