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Old 03-17-2007, 02:17 PM   #1
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look my name is P (PAUSE) E TO THA N-I-S /
IM THE NEW BEST, GOTTA GLOCK AND A NEW VEST/
GOTTA NEW DEAL BOUT TO LAY DOWN A NEW SET /
CO-OPERATE OR I'LL POP-ANATE AND LEAVE YA CREW WET/
IMMA TRUE VET, U DONT WANT TROUBLE SEE/
CUZZ MY NAME GOT BUZZ LIKE A BUMBLE BEE/
I HUSTLE C, POUNDS OF THAT WHITE LADY/
INSTITUTION FLOW, EVERYTHING I WRITE CRAZY/
IM LIKE GRAVY ***** SO IM SEEIN CHECKS/
MY DOUGH MEAN I GROW GREEN LIKE CHIA PETS/
HEAR THE REST SAY MY NAME OUT THEY FUCKIN LIPS/
LIKE I AINT WORD IN THE STREET, LIKE I AINT FUCKIN SICK/
THESE FUCKIN PRICKS GON LEARN TO RESPECT ME/
OR THA BURNER LEAVE A BURN WHERE YA CHEST BE/
SWEETER THAN NESTLE, GREEN HERBAL *****, MY GREEN PURPLE/
WHEN I ZONE, THAT CHROME OF THE BEAM MERK U, BUT/
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MY PRODUCTS GET THE BLOCK POPPIN FOR SOME MORE/
KUSH SO GOOD HAD THE FIENDS KNOCKIN AT THE DOOR/
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I PLAY THE BLOCK, AND WATCH FOR THE HOP-OUT BOYS/
CHEA! 5-O DRIVE BY SLOW THE GLOCK BOMB IT/
CANT FUCK WIT PIGS, SOMETHIN LIKE ISLAMIC/
ALL I KNOW IS POP HEATERS THEN DASH STEAMIN FOR CASH/
ALL THE SHIT I LEARNED AINT TEACHIN A CLASS/
IT STARTED WIT A OUNCE IN A HOUSE, I WAS RUNNIN SHOP/
I MADE SHO' I HAD IT IN, THEY MADE SHO' THEY COME AND COP/
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F.Y.I IM TOO DEEP TO GET COMPARED TO "YUNG"/
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Old 03-17-2007, 11:11 PM   #2
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you realy whouldnt suffer from a name change... did you lose a bet or something?
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Old 03-18-2007, 02:22 AM   #3
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Old 03-18-2007, 03:59 AM   #4
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Re: Last Of The Hot Freestyles Part 3 Check It Out!!

change that first line to

look my name is V (pause) I TO THA R-U-S
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Old 03-18-2007, 11:50 AM   #5
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From Penis to Da Virus... you been fuckin around with them corner hoes again an ya..lol, j/k.
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Old 03-18-2007, 02:40 PM   #6
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From Penis to Da Virus... you been fuckin around with them corner hoes again an ya..lol, j/k.
lol good 1 but shit im lookin for some feed, uppin
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Old 03-20-2007, 10:46 PM   #7
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you should holla at Sage, he needs crew members...
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Re: Last Of The Hot Freestyles Part 3 Check It Out!!

this piece wasnt bad for a keystyle. your structure is a lil strange with all those caps lock letters but its still readable. i thought the multis and the metaphors were the highlights of this drop. sometimes the lines seemed a lil too basic and some complexity would def heat up ur shit but overall i thought this was decent.
My fav lines:
"IM LIKE GRAVY ***** SO IM SEEIN CHECKS/
MY DOUGH MEAN I GROW GREEN LIKE CHIA PETS"

keep droppin and stay up.
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Old 03-21-2007, 10:20 PM   #10
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mad respect for the feed .. reps
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