DunLo vs. The Sage 1

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Check In: Monday April 16th 11:59 Est
Verses Due: Tuesday April 17th 11:59 Est

3-8 Bars Max
(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

No: Biting/Recycling/Ghost Writing.

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No: Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

Crew votes if both battlers agree.

Acceptable Voting Methods:

(1) Bar-By-Bar Break Down.


(2) Catagories (With full explanations) that must include.

Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

Voting ends when ALL battles are finished. So if the league trails on, it’s YOUR fault! Also, if you do not provide two links in your battle thread - you WILL be disqualified. So be sure to vote!

Title shots will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do NOT ask for a title shot.

[Sagius Maximus]

Check

[DunLo]

Checkity Check...G' Luck Sage...

[Sagius Maximus]

Sooo If Dunlo Doesnt Care i need a 24 Hour Add on Please very busy thi is my only post today

[DunLo]

Originally Posted by The Sage 1

Sooo If Dunlo Doesnt Care i need a 24 Hour Add on Please very busy thi is my only post today

Sure man, I have no problems with that...Get it up when you can bro, peace!

[DunLo]

No more extensions...I've already waited 24 hours...good luck...

Yo…
Your worthless homie!!...acts tough on the surface lonely….
‘Living the Revolution?’…Naw! Sage is a ‘display purpose only!’,
Don’t say the drug plot…it’s more played than the thug spot…
Make his blood clot…knows he's ‘behind bars’…and even saved me a ‘mug shot!’,
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Acts like he’ll throne best….but I’ll make him watch his own death…
His zone less…why’s his ‘title in capitals’?...cuz he must be ‘TONE!!Deaf!’…
Call him the quickest chapter…through the thickest factor…
Quote:
Originally Posted by The Sage 1 http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/imag...s/viewpost.gif
I'll got with Story telling for 500 Bob....Naw its just what i lean toward I know its not on your list but its what i like


Sage loves his ‘story telling’…cuz he’s the ‘biggest actor’!,
Plus he tries to sell the bluff…so he must be hell a puffed…
I dwell the stuff…now thinks he’s ‘high’, cuz he ‘took the L enough!’…
Couldn't 'show heat' from the 'first gun show'...only disperse dumb flow...
So his name will be the only way 'The-Sage-1(Won) Vs. Dunlo'...
I'm crashin' finals...blastin', and detatchin' spinals...
Waxin' signals..cuz our 'records reversed', like 'scratchin' vinyls'...

[Sagius Maximus]

lol damn Ima have to work hard

[Sagius Maximus]

Im sorry i cant do it breh I have no personal on you and i never was good with punches so I give you the win i really wanted to show but i cant my verse would'nt compare

[Sagius Maximus]

I didnt want to Ho-show I changed my mind

Lyrically could never match me...He will never pass me
Tell you Call all Ya TUN Buddies I will murder ya lackey's
My soul dark as the tint go beating me is you mental
Its like He just just got back from Avis his flow a rental
Avis=Car Rental Place
Its a Fact Dun's Flow never heavy pads non needed
Beat him do dis in my sleep Him beating me he must be dreaming
I do this for fun....Killing him he already dun
Shoot em in the back of the knee now he cant run
So he can feel the toture..Judge ass ***** begging for order
Charge=Wackes guilty on counts his flows only border

If you dont want it to count it wont I dont think it matters anyway

[Yung Op]

Punches: Dunlo
Personals: Dunlo-The picture joint, the story tellin joint and the closer..Sage ya drop had a couple (the Tun Joint) but they weren't as good.
Multis: Dunlo--Sage this can be a big factor in a win if one has em and the other doesn't cause it presents a large gap in the flow of the verses.
Metas: Dunlo- He had just overall better Metas...the Avis one coulda been raw but the wordin fucked it up.
Flow: Dunlo-As explained above without multi's it's an easy win in this categ.
Wordplay: Dunlo-there wasn't a lot in here but he had it.
Creativity: Dunlo-His verse had more thought process to it.
Nameplay:Tie-Both had a lil neither was better in this categ.
Complexity: DunLo-For obvious reasons, more meta's, better wordin, thought process, personals.
Consistancy DunLo-His verse was pretty much punch to punch and better.
Vocab: Tie-There really wasn't any outstanding use of vocab in either of em.

Overall: DunLo

It was a straight battle, it seemed to me like Sage mighta rushed his verse and it just wasn't as good as Dun's. Good job to both...stay up...peace
-Op